You land the plane really well. I love the callback to Ittai deciding when he wants people in his life at the end.
it feels very formal to “thank the bride and groom” in the intro. i’d personally just say ittai and meghan, but that’s just me.
there’s room to add a little more humor with the meditation story at the beginning. maybe add one additional snippet into that.
consider this rephrasing of the weights section: “Most people are perfectly happy using the 2.5-pound plates the gym provides to progress their lifts. But not Ittai. Instead, he owns his very own set of 1.25-pound plates that he brings to the gym with him.“
I actually don’t know if you need the whole “i’ve gotten to know meghan on my own terms too” section … you go from talking about meghan, to talking about meghan and ittai’s relationship, then to talking about your relationship with meghan. lots of jumping around. i’d just focus on two of those three things.
Cut the second reference to Monopoly Deal
“He does not do much halfway” —> “He does not do things halfway”
“i can’t wait to see what you build together” would rephrase to “…can’t wait to see the life you two build together”